Wednesday, December 29, 2010

Delacorte Press Contest for a First Young Adult Novel

 
"Teachers want us to work, and I say, Fine, I'll work. But you've gotta let me do the kind of work that I wanna do. And for me, it's my drum kit, man. This is my passion. This is the essence of who I am now. But before I had this, I was lost, too. You see what I'm saying? You need to find your reason for living. You've gotta find your big, gigantic drum kit."  ~ Nick Andropolis from "Freaks and Geeks"

Contest:  Delacorte Press Contest
Genre:  Young Adult Novel
Theme:  Contemporary Setting
Prize:  Standard publishing contract and an advance on royalties
Publication:  Hardcover and paperback editions through Delacorte Press
Odds of winning:  one winner a year, sometimes honor books are awarded

I made it a policy long ago to always do the assignments I give to my students.  Since I have asked them to enter writing contest this year, I have committed to entering one of my own.  Or maybe it was because I had decided to enter this contest, that made me think to have my students enter contests.  Chicken or egg.  Doesn't matter now.

The Delacorte Press Contest awards a publishing contract to a writer who has not previously published young adult fiction.  When I started researching information about getting novels published, I came across this contest and decided it would be a lot easier to win this contest, then to start looking for an agent.  Not that I expect to publish the easy way.  This contest is just the next step for me in getting my work out into the world.  I'm mailing off my manuscript this week and once it's sent, I'm going to start working on next year's submission.  At some point, I will start looking for an agent, but in the meantime, I'll do this.

I've been thinking a lot lately about why publication is my goal.  Why not just write for the love for writing?  It's not about the money.  If Random House told me tomorrow, we want to publish your book, we think we can make a ton of money off it, but we're not going to pay you a dime, I'd let them have it.  (Don't worry, my husband would be the voice of reason.)  It's not about fame.  First of all, not too many young adult authors are famous.  Secondly, those of you that know my turtle self, know that I don't enjoy the spot light. 

Here's what it is about publication for me:  I want to write something good enough for someone else to want to sell it.  Many people have suggested self-publishing as an option, but that doesn't appeal to me at all.  I want someone else to say, "This is good enough."

I have written before about the summer before ninth grade when I attended a creative writing camp.  The very first day of camp, it was apparent to me that I was not the most talented writer in the room, but I could hold my own.  I worked hard all week and was one of the more prolific writers in the group.  At the end of the week, I expressed disappointment that the camp had come to an end so soon.  I was the only one.  Everyone else was glad it was over.

The teacher, Mrs. Stanley, wrote us each a letter at the end of the week.  To me, she wrote: "Michelle, You are way ahead of most students in your writing.  You should be able to do whatever you want with it."  These words had a profound affect on me.  They confirmed what I knew, I am not the most talented writer ever, but if I work hard at it, I should be able to do whatever I want.  Desire is the key. 

In an episode of the TV series, "Freaks and Geeks," Nick Andropolis, whose efforts toward becoming a drummer keep being dashed, is staying with Lindsey's family.  He claims to Mr. Weir that listening to great drummers is his homework.
Mr. Weir says, "If you were really a drummer, then your homework would be practicing your drums."
Nick protests, "Well, I'd like to practice my drums, you know, but my dad gave them away."
"Well then," says Mr. Weir, "you go out and you get two sticks and you beat them on a rock."

The message here, of course, is that practice is the key to become good and you never let anyone or anything stand in your way to achieve your dream.  Later on, Nick gives up drumming for disco dancing and I don't know what the message is in that, but I do now that no matter what happens with this contest (or next year's contest, or my attempts to find an agent), the most important thing for me to do is to keep writing - to keep beating my sticks on a rock.  Because as hard as the writing process is, I still feel better when I'm writing, then when I'm not. 

Wednesday, December 8, 2010

We've Got a Winner!!!!

Remember when I told you that if my students entered enough writing contests, at least one of them would be sure to win?  Well, it happened a bit sooner than I thought!  One of my seventh grade students received a letter yesterday from Utah Central Credit Union stating that they were so impressed with his entry, they were inspired to create a special award for English Language Learners.  He received a certificate and a $25 prize for his essay about his greatest life lesson. 

The kids have been asking me, "What would you do if one of us actually won a writing contest?" 

I always say, "I would run screaming and yelling down the hall and brag to EVERYONE I knew!"  I did just that.  The student was so shocked, he didn't have much to say, but hopefully it sinks in when we present his certificate at the school-wide awards assembly in January.

I will be writing a thank you letter to the folks at UCCU for looking beyond grammatical and spelling mistakes to the heart of what an essay is really about.  Here's to the immigrant spirit!!!

Sunday, November 14, 2010

On a personal note

On a personal note, I decided to go out on a limb and really challenge myself this year.  Shortly before November, I had a dream about four characters who were living in an abandoned warehouse (I later changed this to an abandoned 7-11) during a post disaster, futuristic time.  The four characters, who were not previously known to one another or related in any way, were completely dependent on one another for survival.  One day they decided to stop merely surviving and attend the local community college.  When I woke up, the characters were still so vivid and real, I decided to try my hand at science fiction - nothing too crazy, just four characters in their late teens trying to survive in the not so distant future.  Due to their circumstances, they had very limited access to any technology, so I thought,  perhaps I could pull it off.

Now it is two weeks into NaNoWriMo and I can say without any doubt, I suck at science fiction.   (I know, I know, you’re surprised!)  In  fact, I’m so bad at it, that I’m lagging farther behind in my wordcount than I ever have before.  Today, in order to make up for time, I sent my four characters to Club Retro to attend a concert in which a 1990s Ska tribute band, Unholy Genius, performs.  They play songs from Madness, No Doubt, Save Ferris, and Reel Big Fish.  This scene has been the most fun to write so far and I got 5,512 words out of it.  So much for my career in Sci Fi!

Where did the time go?

Well, it's the end of week two already and I have neglected to update this blog in the crazy rush to get NaNoWriMo 2010 rolling!

We spent two weeks in October prewriting, which went much more smoothly than last year.  My eighth graders consistently griped and complained.  We have to do this again?!  Once we hit November first, the eighth graders were off and running, with double and triple their goals from last year, keeping pace without a problem.

My sevies are struggling a little more than my students did last year.  I've started individual writing conferences and here's the problem:  they are worrying way too much about their stories!  Rather than writing a lot of nonsense, which is what last year's sevies did, this year's sevies are much more concerned about plot (as well as spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.)  Little by little, we're working them out of the worry.  It helps a ton that I have an assistant and a student teacher as well as thirty or so volunteers.  Oh, and a lot of Halloween candy!  Daily wordcount challenges and Word Wars competitions for candy are boosting those wordcounts.   We're entering the second half of NaNoWriMo slightly behind in our wordcounts (me included), but we're gaining momentum and excited for the upcoming week.

Sunday, October 24, 2010

Contest #5: NaNoWriMo

Contest:  National Novel Writing Month
Genre:  Novel
Theme:  Anything you want - YES!!
Prize:  a new novel written by you, stickers, buttons, certificates, candy, party in December, increased writing fluency, self-esteem boost, rollicking good time
Publication:  need not be shared, unless the author wants to
Odds of winning:  EVERY SINGLE STUDENT CAN WIN - isn't that the BEST?!
For more information:  http://ywp.nanowrimo.org
 
 This is the writing contest that started it all.  NaNoWriMo.  I have published a couple of articles about last year's experience doing NaNoWriMo with students, so I won't rehash it all here.  Essentially it is a personal challenge to write a novel in thirty days.  I wanted to start recording this year's process and I'll begin with this year's goal: to go BIGGER and BETTER than last year.  I intend to do it in these ways:

1.  EVERY single English Language Learner in my program will write a novel this year.  Last year I only required intermediate and advanced students.  This year, everyone, including the Newbies (what I affectionately call students who have been in the United States for less than one year).  These students are non-speakers of English, and thus, (technically) non-writers.  Don't worry, we have lots of support in place: volunteer tutors, scaffolded worksheets, sugar-laden candy, and proof that it can be done - (thanks to last year's newbies who wrote novels even though I didn't think they could).

2.  More adult participation - last year we had four adults in our building writing novels, this year we are up to about six.  I have another week to convince some more to get on board.

3.  Reading a novel before NaNoWriMo.  Last year I decided to do NaNoWriMo two weeks before November, so there wasn't time to read a novel together before we did it.  Most students had read novels before, but not all of them had.  This year we read "Summer on Wheels" by Gary Soto.  It took a lot longer than I would have liked and we had to barrel through it without many of the assignments I would typically do.  It was a great choice, though, for several reasons.  It's funny, it's realistic, it's got GREAT characters, and it incorporates a LOT of Spanish (and a little French, which my one French speaker really enjoyed).  It has been a great reference as we've started planning our own novels.

4.  Last year's two biggest complaints were: writer's cramp, and counting words, so I booked the library's computer lab for the month of November.  Students can type, handwrite, or a combination of both.  This gives options and options are always good.  I also received a classroom donation of a handful of flashdrives in case students need to move their novel from home to school.

5.  Two more teachers are participating, one at Bryant (mi hermana, Adrianna Jorgensen) and my esteemed colleague, Suzan Lake at East High School.  Last year I shared ideas and pitfalls with teachers on the NaNoWriMo educator forums, but it will be more fun to collaborate with real-live teachers.

6.  Bigger and better December party.  Not sure what this is going to look like this year, but I've promised the NaNo-experienced 8th graders that they could help plan the party.  I'm considering an evening parent night?  Not sure.  We'll have to see . . . 

More posts to come as our pursuit for the 30 day novel begins in just EIGHT days . . .

Contest #4: USOE's 27th Annual Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Essay Contest

Contest:  Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Essay Contest
Genre:  Essay
Theme:  What impact has Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.'s legacy of community service had on your vision for the future, and what can you do to be responsible in your community?
Prize:  1st place: $125; runner-up: $50 (Attend Keynote Address and Luncheon)
Publication:  Contest info. doesn't report anything, but I have heard previous year's winning essays read on various radio stations during Black History Month
Odds of winning:  one middle school winner in the state of Utah, 4 runner-ups from grades 7th - 12th
For more information:  http://www.schools.utah.gov/equity/DOCS/mlk-essay-packet.aspx
 
This contest is a very big deal at our school.  Our school has had a recent grand prize winner and a history of submitting numerous entries.  This year's theme ties nicely into things we've been talking about at school.  "Responsibility" was our theme in Advisory class last month and community service is an on-going emphasis at our school.  Social justice is always an important topic in my classroom and one I enjoy talking about with students.  I haven't always been into writing contests, but I have had students enter this one numerous times in the past.

However, now that we do NaNoWriMo, the MLK Essay Contest comes at a very, very bad time.  I was hoping to get the contest information early enough this year to do something about it, but at the moment, it's just not possible.  We are so pressed for time as November is rapidly approaching.  
 
Because this essay contest is important and because of my quest to enter as many contests as possible, I decided to have my advisory class participate.  It is a tricky thing doing something so heavily academic in Advisory class.  We do not give letter grades in Advisory and it is only a twenty minute period.  Typically, it's difficult to get Advisory classes to buy into this sort of thing without a grade to hold over their heads.  I'm feeling pretty good this year, however, since I've taken the "writing contest" motivational approach as opposed to the "do it for a grade" motivational approach.  Also, I have loaded my Advisory class with eighth graders from my program, so although not all of them are currently my Language Arts students, most of them are and are familiar with this project to enter contests.  I'm going to do a follow-up post to report how this goes.  If it works out, I might try doing more writing contests in Advisory.  We'll just have to see . . .

Contest #3: UCCU's Young Leadership Scholarship

Contest:  Utah Central Credit Union's Young Leadership Scholarhip
Genre:  Narrative Essay
Theme:  "What is the Greatest Lesson You Have Learned in Life?"
Prize:  1st Place: $1,000; 2nd Place: $500; 3rd Place: $250
Publication:  Read aloud at UCCU's annual member meeting in 2011
Odds of winning:  three winners in Salt Lake and Carbon Counties
For more information:  www.utahcentral.com and click on "For Teens" under Life Phases
 
So, it has been a long time since I have posted.  Mostly what we've been up to is reading "Summer on Wheels" by Gary Soto, getting ready for National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo).  I thought it might be nice to read a novel before starting to write our own.  After we finished the novel, I had three days before I wanted to start preparing for NaNoWriMo, so I squeezed in this contest.

I had the students discuss the "life lessons" Hector and Mando learn as they journey on a bike trip from East Los Angeles to Santa Monica.  We then discussed our own life lessons, choosing the most important one to write for this essay.  The essays needed to be typed to be submitted to the contest and we didn't have that kind of time, so I gave them the UEA weekend to type their essays for extra credit.  I was surprised at the number of submissions I received, which told me that many of the students are buying into this writing contest thing.

Special thanks to my student teacher, Emily Primrose, for hand delivering our entries to the credit union!!